[046] Jealousy 妒忌


#046 Thank you everyone for your precious frank feedback! Things that I'd gathered from various interviews include...
感谢大家诚恳的回复!搜集到的意见包括...

1) Need a character intro page
需要人物介绍首页

2) Characters have to be more exaggerated "inside" and outside (expressions)
人物必须性格夸张,表情也得更夸张
Make some little outrageous remarks and poke fun at things,not everything in our daily life is pleasant.We sometimes act or behave in ways that we don't others to know ~ we would crack up if we read them in comics. E.g. Sitting on a toilet reading newspaper with one hand scratching the lower back just right above the buttocks.

3) Characters need to appear at specific places so we know where they belong and a sense of overall continuity
人物必须在特定的某地方一直出现,这样有助与理解人物和总连贯性

4) There should be more conflicts/problems that the characters are facing so we are curious to read on.
假如有更多冲突或问题,比较会产生兴趣继续阅读

5) We want to know the character's purpose/mission.
想知道人物的目的

6) Maybe can include family members
或许能包括家人

7) Less wordy, more action/funny expressions
少一点字,多一些有趣夸张表情

8) More provocative suggestions with clear opinion
多一些有点争论性的意见

I appreciate that you all had stayed on with me during this difficult "boring" times and I'll do my best to improve my content. Although it will take some time, please let me know your true thoughts whenever possible.
非常感谢大家在我这“无聊”的时候,配我一起渡过~我会尽力把最好的漫画呈现给大家!
虽然会花一些时间,不过请你随时把你最诚恳的意见告诉我!

A big thank you for giving me a chance and your attention :~)
最后感谢你们给予我机会和关注,谢谢!^^

Comments

  1. 露營像難民營一樣~~主辦單位雨天備案一點都不確實
    只會說童軍就是要能吃苦.....
    結果回來研究所近度整整落後一周
    忙死了~"~...

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  2. 小卓:難道是因為預算不足所以就沒什麼備案?
    要你們吃苦是為了普渡眾生嗎?沒必要那麼吃力吧?
    你那麼忙還不忘來這,真是感謝感謝!!!
    加油加油!我也得趕一趕報告,期末就是這週和下週了!

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  3. 童軍團要能克服困難我接受阿~~~
    但是我不接受這屬於國際活動的活動
    辦的如此糟糕.....
    何況主辦單位是我們中華民國的童軍總會...

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  4. 小卓:原來是面子問題嗎?
    國際活動的話,就表示有外國人嘍?
    他們有說什麼嗎?

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  5. 外國的朋友應該都覺得很不錯
    因為資源都先提供外國朋友了
    這個我同意 也沒話說
    但是童軍露營的基本要素 都因為雨天而全沒了
    替代方案 幾乎是沒有...
    很難接受花了不少錢 卻什麼都沒有玩到
    沒有實質的價值 也沒有心靈層的價值
    空....
    EVA姊甘脆問問水晶球
    "你知道童軍是什麼嗎?"
    我還蠻好奇水晶球會說什麼~~哈

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  6. 小卓: 水晶球會建議你去查字典XD
    不過話說,你們能投訴或向主辦當局回應嗎?
    假如人多的話,就不是吃苦的問題了~

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